The Elements Analysis: Linked Narratives of Pain

Young Freya is visiting her self-absorbed mother in Cornwall when she comes across teenage twins. "Nothing better than being aware of a secret," they advise her, "is having one of your own." In the days that come after, they violate her, then entomb her breathing, combination of nervousness and frustration passing across their faces as they ultimately free her from her improvised coffin.

This may have functioned as the jarring centrepiece of a novel, but it's just one of multiple horrific events in The Elements, which assembles four novellas – published individually between 2023 and 2025 – in which characters negotiate past trauma and try to achieve peace in the present moment.

Disputed Context and Thematic Exploration

The book's release has been clouded by the inclusion of Earth, the subsequent novella, on the candidate list for a prominent LGBTQ+ writing prize. In August, most other candidates pulled out in protest at the author's debated views – and this year's prize has now been called off.

Discussion of trans rights is absent from The Elements, although the author addresses plenty of major issues. LGBTQ+ discrimination, the impact of mainstream and online outlets, family disregard and abuse are all examined.

Four Stories of Pain

  • In Water, a mourning woman named Willow relocates to a isolated Irish island after her husband is incarcerated for terrible crimes.
  • In Earth, Evan is a athlete on legal proceedings as an participant to rape.
  • In Fire, the adult Freya balances vengeance with her work as a medical professional.
  • In Air, a dad travels to a burial with his young son, and ponders how much to reveal about his family's background.
Trauma is accumulated upon pain as hurt survivors seem fated to meet each other continuously for eternity

Related Accounts

Links multiply. We initially encounter Evan as a boy trying to flee the island of Water. His trial's panel contains the Freya who shows up again in Fire. Aaron, the father from Air, collaborates with Freya and has a child with Willow's daughter. Secondary characters from one narrative resurface in cottages, pubs or judicial venues in another.

These plot threads may sound tangled, but the author understands how to power a narrative – his prior acclaimed Holocaust drama has sold numerous units, and he has been rendered into numerous languages. His direct prose shines with gripping hooks: "in the end, a doctor in the burns unit should be wiser than to experiment with fire"; "the initial action I do when I reach the island is change my name".

Character Development and Narrative Power

Characters are sketched in concise, effective lines: the empathetic Nigerian priest, the troubled pub landlord, the daughter at struggle with her mother. Some scenes resonate with melancholy power or perceptive humour: a boy is punched by his father after urinating at a football match; a narrow-minded island mother and her Dublin-raised neighbour trade barbs over cups of weak tea.

The author's ability of carrying you wholeheartedly into each narrative gives the return of a character or plot strand from an previous story a genuine excitement, for the first few times at least. Yet the aggregate effect of it all is dulling, and at times almost comic: suffering is piled on pain, coincidence on chance in a bleak farce in which wounded survivors seem destined to encounter each other continuously for all time.

Thematic Depth and Concluding Assessment

If this sounds not exactly life and more like uncertainty, that is element of the author's thesis. These hurt people are burdened by the crimes they have experienced, caught in patterns of thought and behavior that stir and plunge and may in turn hurt others. The author has talked about the influence of his personal experiences of abuse and he depicts with sympathy the way his cast navigate this perilous landscape, extending for remedies – solitude, icy sea dips, reconciliation or refreshing honesty – that might let light in.

The book's "elemental" framing isn't terribly informative, while the brisk pace means the discussion of sexual politics or digital platforms is mostly shallow. But while The Elements is a defective work, it's also a entirely engaging, survivor-centered saga: a valued rebuttal to the typical preoccupation on authorities and perpetrators. The author demonstrates how suffering can affect lives and generations, and how years and tenderness can quieten its reverberations.

Steve Hall
Steve Hall

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